Thursday, 26 May 2016


Today the children used this photo as a writing prompt. We were focussing on descriptive language and letting our imaginations run wild. This a couple of the pieces of writing they worked very hard on!

Mutant Gumballs - NH

I recoiled in horror as I came upon this disgusting yellow monstrosity. It looked like a mutant gumball! Now I was so close to it, I fainted in horror as I touched it. When I woke up, I was in the Land of MUTANT GUMBALLS!! It's such a  HORRIBLE sight! I looked around in this disgusting world. I think I nearly spewed all over the place. I looked at myself in a shiny bit of one of the mutant gumballs, but I came at the wrong time - it turned to look at me. I stood in horror as it stared at me whilst licking its big, black slimy lips. I tried to run away but I was too slow. It bit my leg with yellow and black pointy seeds as its teeth. It pulled me back and gulped me whole. I woke up and realised it was all a dream, but just to be sure, I had to see my lemon tree.

LT's writing

I recoiled in horror as I came upon this disgusting yellow monster. It was black and yellow, with black lips. I spat out lemon juice and had weird teeth that were are big. It looks like a Pac man that is gross!


1 comment:

  1. Amazing story! I love the way you brought the picture to life Lachlan. Mum😎😎

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