Walt describe a moment in time and add detail.
As I saw my competitors gaining up on me I felt terrible I thought I would come 2nd. I felt the waves splashing on my face. The salt water tasted discussting it was so salty. I heard the crowd cheering loud it became louder and louder. I smelled the victory it was so exciting. My arms started to ack but I didint stop paddling the oars on my boat. I said to myself do not stop! I was in the lead I have wun! I got the gold medal!
By Carmen Stewart.